Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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Hi Scott, I like the way you have a picture on each slide it keeps the reader interested. The slide about Golden Retrievers reminds me about my dog who is also part Golden Retriever. Next time you could add more colour into your words and background to make it more attractive to the readers eyes
ReplyDeleteHi Scott, I enjoyed the part when you called that dog a POTATO with legs, it cracks me up. This reminded me of when my friend got a dog and he called it potato. Next time you could change the marshmallow with legs to the Pomeranian dog which is its actual name. Really funny - want to see more.
ReplyDeletehi scott i really liked your slide my favourite part was the cute puppys slide.hope you have a good day
ReplyDeleteHi Scott,I like how cute every dog was,you taught me a lot of dog breeds. Next time you could make something about cats. By Sree
ReplyDeleteHi Scott, I liked the way you had funny videos, did you think about taking a few of the images out? I thought it was a bit crowded. Maybe you could take out the ali-a video.š My favourite dog is a Labrador.
ReplyDeleteit is so funny:)! and cool! :) and i like it
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