Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 23, 2019
Perfect pepeha
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Hi Scott its Harvey next time you could put capitals letters before full stops in your paragraph down below your pepeha. this reminded me when I did my pepeha.
ReplyDeleteHi scott its me Caleb and I think your pepeha was really good and next time you could put capitals letters and full stops this remindid me when I did it.
ReplyDeleteHi Scott it is me Sree I really liked how you added a picture that actually looked like you This reminded me from when I did it. Next time you could add a longer description
ReplyDeleteHi Scott you were right about it being perfect. but next time maybe you could and more grammar. this reminded me of when I tried to make a pepeha but failed.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you had your bitmoji. did you think about making a English translation? next time do some more punctuation.
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